It isn't stupid, it just isn't great. It's lacking a bit here and there. But seeing how this is a personal text made for venting I can definitely respect what you're doing. If it wasn't for the fact that writing eased my mind I probably wouldn't have started doing it myself in the first place. Keep writing and stick to improving yourself. Peace.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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