You know me if you’ve seen how I write— sometimes I get so caught up on rhymes and it takes me away. I been gettin back into it recently. Like they said, I’ve seen you write better shit but that doesn’t make this bad by any means. The beginning was my favorite cuz you not only had multis, but you threw some imagery and more description in the opening lines moreso than the end. But I always enjoy reading your shit
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Originally Posted by Objective
Judging from those pics and the state you're in I've concluded with the fact that the world needs more Bodeys.
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