the fluck is happening in here?
my name is Daniel meaning god is my judge.
I shall now be yours:
Lars you picked on Frank. That shit was comedy. But you still picked on Frank. If you wrote that verse in a house of mirrors all the reflections would indicate a thumbs down. I would have liked to have seen what you said about one of the other contestants..Hush in particular. Next time do him.
When I read it I pictured the Care Bears opening segment for some reason. Shit was wordy but poignant....dammit now you got me wordy. Fluck outta here b. I really didn't like your shit but I liked your shit though. Entertaining whilte creative and poetic yet expletive mannerisms into his character and family........you picked on Frank. It was expected almost. The safe attack.
6/10
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I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff
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