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Geno · 07-18-2013, 09:34 PM

thought both were dope. verse one came out more creative in my opinion, took the pic and ran with the silhouttes and what they "COULD HAVE BEEN" INSTEAD OF WHAT THEY OBVIOUSLY ARE. THOUGHT THE STORY WENT WELL WITH THAT CONCEPT. had some off the wall lines and vocab in there that seemed to just be thrown in for sake of rhyming which was a turn off to me at times.

verse two was straight forward. pretty well done and not to out of the box content and idea wise. captured the image and did what it told you to do for the most part. it was well written and didnt have to much incredible -or otherwise unbelievable things happening it that werent meant to happen

gotta vote verse 2

good battle

07-18-2013, 09:34 PM	#10
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	thought both were dope. verse one came out more creative in my opinion, took the pic and ran with the silhouttes and what they "COULD HAVE BEEN" INSTEAD OF WHAT THEY OBVIOUSLY ARE. THOUGHT THE STORY WENT WELL WITH THAT CONCEPT. had some off the wall lines and vocab in there that seemed to just be thrown in for sake of rhyming which was a turn off to me at times. verse two was straight forward. pretty well done and not to out of the box content and idea wise. captured the image and did what it told you to do for the most part. it was well written and didnt have to much incredible -or otherwise unbelievable things happening it that werent meant to happen gotta vote verse 2 good battle __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*