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Coup · 07-18-2013, 08:45 PM

v/ Adonny

since it's round two I shall explain voting

A came with a vivid count of Revelations 12, and a fluid 10 lines that all were unity with one another, maximizing her limits...good imagery, nice pace and some food for thought. Enjoyed reading...

Darth Helmet

I like the dark, almost murder-ball sport you gave us...the violet grids with the laser slice imagery...representing the homing beacon....I was jarred a bit when you started to through in specific references like Agartha, Arabians, the bed room, the mask and the night time sounds of the brain insanity....the time space and how why this all went down was blurred and was not too sure why this was happening...like trying to watch a movie 1/3 of the way done...

07-18-2013, 08:45 PM	#11
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	v/ Adonny since it's round two I shall explain voting A came with a vivid count of Revelations 12, and a fluid 10 lines that all were unity with one another, maximizing her limits...good imagery, nice pace and some food for thought. Enjoyed reading... Darth Helmet I like the dark, almost murder-ball sport you gave us...the violet grids with the laser slice imagery...representing the homing beacon....I was jarred a bit when you started to through in specific references like Agartha, Arabians, the bed room, the mask and the night time sounds of the brain insanity....the time space and how why this all went down was blurred and was not too sure why this was happening...like trying to watch a movie 1/3 of the way done... __________________ What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.