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Old 07-18-2013, 02:40 AM   #2
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Zombie's verse is my favorite of any from this year. Both of you went bananas at once, favorite lines from each:

2nd half

Motionless, hearing, you. like ‘borinnnnng’ so arrogant,
a trip to the pub is more of a social experiment. Scoring
a mention or two with your local acquaintance. More so I’m patient
Study the angles presented. Through an angular axis, on the plane I’m accessing
Write a page or two, whole piece; about how you stare at your phone screen while saying a sentence, then predict your demeanor by subtle facial expression
Wish you civilians would give me a chance
instead of writing me off
I try to think so brilliantly that
the type of excitement gets me slightly pissed. God
It’s tiring. Caution. The time has been sung.
Line after lion, song after sun
Decipher the choir, despite all it’s done
Don’t have road to speak, so license the tongue.
And if I run out of warpaint, I like biting my tongue till it pours
I’m like this, cause, drugs, is not something I seek
You’re transparent. Take the presumption I’m tongue’in-in-cheek

ouch

1st
No purpose, and if bridge fits, then burn it. It’s as if, It’s all in sync, cause this misfits discouraged. Diminutive. How can you possibly think of the end? Fuck, I accidentally cut myself, I mean of course, if you’re into that shit. THEN LET’S GET INTO THAT SHIT. Every metaphor sculpted to precision. To metamorph into visions, of a better story for children. I’m the damsel in my own adaptation, where my face’s statue emblazoned on a mantle, so brazen you could take a snapshot of the haven and slap it on to a painting.

unreal


I don't know what to add
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