Zen: Dope verse, consistent flow aside from the 'time to start/torn apart' bar, and you went out with a bang. Outro stood out to me as a very suitable ending. That bar was really the only line that stood out tho, everything was pleasantly average.
Camp: Felt flow could have been a lot more engaging in the first portion. Lines were good but limited by the flow to me. The last quarter was pretty tight though, wish the whole verse was on that level but feel you needed to do more here.
+1 Zen
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