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This match was a reach for both on terms of creating something out of nothing really.

Obj.- you went more for the general use and play to the obvious but brought nice execution with the emotion tying in with the content. The rhyme scheme was kinda stretched here and there... The direction was more the interest to me honestly. Taking something obvious about Pedo's and shit...

Inn.- the direction you took was play to the sig but then u tried to really out a twist with the abstractiveness of it all but I honestly feel it detoured from making it comes strong and just fell flat really. It was a nice twist on it but so sporadic it hits like wait... What... The first stanza should have went with that all the way thru TBH an it would have finished really strong.

Ok I have my pro's and cons on both but my vote goes to OBJ... For really taking the diction and direction and keeping it steady through out with no real swing at something that's off the top.. Inn... That ending damages a lot plus it being horrid with detail which made me mad cause u were looming with the flow tbh ... I just prefer obj. For overall stature being fluid