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Old 07-17-2013, 12:34 AM   #10
Atomic
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i go down south for vacation, chillin in the sun fool
wen he goes down south means kentuckys of dope in his ass to be a drug mule
cool wordplay, kinda a force but i'll give u it.
ur a cheating faggot, beggin for votes is a evil distraction
act like u got brains & braun in the squad but really just gettin kicked out for illegal actions
funny but meh
got plenty of options to merk u wit, u dont wanna fight coward
its either blow u up or burry u after i choose between a laker rocket like dwight howard
wording is literally awful but the concept is sick. so i like the bar.
u dont mean shit to the crew, this fags forever alone holmes
see im the bad guy, ur less significant then the tooth pick razor ramon throws
lol.. meh
u can neva hold on to a title, droppin the ball is wrong u wack
anything he Champ Bailey a open pick opportunity to score an accomplishment on ur stats
coo
fuckin all the women in ur fam, ur mad im tearin' there pussies out, B
cuz 1 night with basis, got her comin at'em side ways every time he bitches about me
okay, dece
plowing her to the point she bleeds, how can this damn fuck stop it
im stuffin that hole till i get an invitation to be in this years slam dunk contest
so simple, ok..
got the samurai sword sharpen'd up, bloods about to spill u bum
& stab the blade in his chest safari resembles a group of lions eating a kill in one
the connection isn't good. wording is poor imo. i've done/seen safari a few times & it was better imo. okay attempt tho

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Can't tell me nothin. Might lose? How the fuck they even hype you.
If you really wanna Lecture the God, I suggest your faggot ass leave the site too.
mehhh so many lecture based punches have been done, it was a coolish flip tho
My 1-2 punch is hailed as the baddest, u can tell that I'm majesty.
While you got the kind of Signature Combo that borders on Pyro levels of faggotry.
nahhh this isn't hard hitting @ all
Fuck firing. I don't need to spray rounds to get the gore simmerin.
Pistol whip u 'til u lay down & Trey Pound that ass worse than George Zimmeran.
hahaha, cool
Girls run from u cuz ur a shitty investment, always getting neglected.
It's expected that we'd see Alpine over a bitch that moved to that city in Texas.
cool w/p liked it
My lines are the safe bet. Them shits are as hard as the devil.
Yours are not safe for Work while mine are givin you just that at Artemis levels.
don't get it/care to investigate
If I'm the G.O.A.T. hands down - it's enough proof I'll kill ya kid.
If you're the G.O.A.T. hands down….…that just means you'll lose like Silva did.
simple, ok
I'm a trained fighter. Ur a lame writer inside of a Paul Blart casing.
Ur definition of Shadowbox is pickin up a power-up in Sonic & All-Stars Racing.
LOLLLLL DOPE LOTB
Comin sloppy'll get u in bloody bodybags slumped like in Deadwood.
I'd like to see Knightwing it against me only to end up Under The Red Hood.
cool, enjoyed it

overall bar for bar i'd say it was..

u can neva hold on to a title, droppin the ball is wrong u wack
anything he Champ Bailey a open pick opportunity to score an accomplishment on ur stats
fuckin all the women in ur fam, ur mad im tearin' there pussies out, B
cuz 1 night with basis, got her comin at'em side ways every time he bitches about me

vs

Fuck firing. I don't need to spray rounds to get the gore simmerin.
Pistol whip u 'til u lay down & Trey Pound that ass worse than George Zimmeran.
Girls run from u cuz ur a shitty investment, always getting neglected.
It's expected that we'd see Alpine over a bitch that moved to that city in Texas.
I'm a trained fighter. Ur a lame writer inside of a Paul Blart casing.
Ur definition of Shadowbox is pickin up a power-up in Sonic & All-Stars Racing.

Comin sloppy'll get u in bloody bodybags slumped like in Deadwood.
I'd like to see Knightwing it against me only to end up Under The Red Hood.

cool verses from both, allen came lil worse than i expected because everything i've read from him in the past i enjoyed, a lot of this was just simple & had meh wording for me. this was also one of the first beyond verses i've seen that wasn't dope all the way through. he did have a bunch of nice lines along w/ lotb tho which didn't surprise me. in my eyes beyond had him w/ wording, complexity & just overall concepts & his execution was just simply better. can't really call this an edge but it was closeish but i'm gonna give the W to beyond overall for just a much more polished/consistent verse. on a side note that shadowbox bar was nuts.

v/ Beyond.
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