[~RustyGunZ~]

Originally Posted by CymbiCort

Your shittyname wont make you popular,better of cleanin it b
Only people who heard of dirt reached for a sponge immediately
This was cool. Try not to make your set up line longer than your second though. Also could have use the set up a lot better. You're suggesting people feel dirty thinking of him the way you did the first half of your punch, so the first line set up you should have mentioned that and built up to it.

you ain't openin eyes wide as owls, cuz your lame ass more colon than powell
assumed ur A lazy jamaican farmer cuz "Si,mon, cow well"/sigh mon cow well
This didn't make sense. To jumbled.

Beef I cook up and put to the grills quicker than a manhattan doorman
Especially since your name explains your views on sexuality since eric foreman
For man doesn't really work. For men would make sense but yeah. Okay idea but it just doesn't work. Can't make shit reach, if it doesn't work don't use it.

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