[~RustyGunZ~]

Originally Posted by Ronic

Exstacy, LD50, have eric dumb ass thrown out the house
Cant handle his shit, only thing E Foreman is foam at the mouth
Nah. Idk why people are using the whole name Foreman for the punches, I put it there for the dissected ones tbh. Wording was bad and the concept wasn't really harsh.

Coward wit a weak bladder, dude wouldnt take one gun to scare
Fighting style dirty, harry saw arms n soiled his underwear
You used his name, but didn't insult him with it. The first part "fighting style Dirty" doesn't make sense really. Here is a good way this could have been used...

You're a weak faggot, in the ring you won't last w/ hands a glance
If I'm ever Fighting Dirty.. he'll have to do THAT to even stand a chance

Make both the nameplay segment AND the connection create an insult directed at him. Yours was just a generic really the way you delivered it. Also adding "style" before Dirty threw off the wording.

Dude creates wack shit, wit a crowbar still couldnt get win leverage
If a bitch wants TC cock, tail trynna buy that gin beverage
Wording was okayish, also iffy when you split the wordplay into both parts of the punch. Not bad though.

This American Idle, Cowell too daft for a challenge - fact:
Any bitch that Sim pull would have to be exactly that
You have to use segments when dissecting so they match up with how the name is pronounced in full. Sy min not Sim un. So this is forced. IF it wasn't though it'd be cool. Good idea just doesn't work on his name.

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