Metts
I dnot nead help. yuo cnat baet me, if he thniks he ken this dood is boozing
^ now you can tell everyone gow wrote one of my lines and have an excuse for losing
someone plz tell me these legends he's eaten? im sooo over this 'black' bitch
idk who the fluctuate but i know all your verses do that between mediocre and wack shit
see, im original while every member of the board is fathering his game
cuz he's copied so much from discussions itd put ANY courts stenographer to shame
Kar
Your punches don't carry lots of sting, come to my hood and the shots'll ring
Doesn't matter if u run, I'm clapping behind u like the trailer for “The Conjuring"
Metts that opener was sick....real nice flip and my LOTB...wasn't feeling the second bar because of the rhyme, kinda off to me. overall a real solid verse only thing I wasn't feelin at all was that second bar.
Kar...I don't know what happened here...I get the opener...but it was mangled so bad it didn't hit....the Conjuring I liked, decent punch there...the rest seemed rushed maybe?...I hope it was at least...just seemed too simple and predictable...
V/Metts
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