Thread: The Reason You're Wack
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Old 07-16-2013, 07:47 AM   #17
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The rhyme scheme is very advanced and entertaining. The introspective tone and reflective quality make the writing stronger/give it direction. Enjoyed the mix between vocabulary of some bigger words and some light entertainment E.g., "Jollies."
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