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NYCSPITZ this was great the rhyme scheme was on point and some nice metaphors exposed from an angle that usually is played but here was quite refreshing on the takes you had chosen. The content tho at times I felt to be a little over zealous and convey from the diction you were aiming for... But overall fucking awesome read
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pohfig it has been a great deliver to read such work from you recently and this was a prime example of such ease and simplicity yet when worded precise and with a vibe and delivery very catching it just moves with one motion. Heavy meaning and such a stron message!!
Mvgt: Pohfig... Was just as a whole superb clean and crisp both did fucking awesome and I appreciate the work put in...
Thank you guys