Pyro- you got a nice approach but when you hit a stride of nice wit u seem to break it by throwing in a finisher that's lackluster to the set up of imagery you had put before. Inconsistent in other words but I like how you vibe in the flow ... Also your word choice at teams could have been more creative in my eyes as sometimes I read your bars and I could finish it in a way or grasp what u were gonna say.. Deeming it predictable and no real flair to the verse
NyC- your contet was viscous ... It started off stron and then just continued to roll from there and stayed on point. It being key style of course we don't expect nice keys but this here was a nice fucking key with nice diction and imagery set. I liked the story an the grim look you approached the topic with.
Both highly creative and both well presented for a key... But I got NYC taking it with one category he outshined in with was wording/content props to both for dropping
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