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Old 07-14-2013, 04:49 AM   #9
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Why does the hierarchy matter so? Calico adage flows
Down from prose addled with salvaged bones and an amber glow
Egyptologist went to school off a Cambridge loan, studying by a lamp at home
What asphyxiated mantra lies beneath the sandy knoll of the Sphinx
which can’t be known through a glyph, since in summertime I fled
Is it justified to call me a necrophiliac if I elect to mummify the dead?
We’re all riding in Shambala express, and through the drums, Allah connects
Take the sum of rhymes I said it’ll compose a jambalaya spread
A chunk of Guyana bread, playing mancala out of a Kabbalah chest
Antiquity’s not a game, it’s why we gamble with Mayan heads in Malta chess
My seventh chakra’s blessed, even though I’m not sure it exists
Either my heartbeat’s rapidly increasing or my inner core’s a burning abyss

The fuck lines were dope. Smooth and funky rhyme scheme that I can honestly appreciate. The chakra line was bonkers as well and the necrophiliac mummify! Some nice content that was highly influential to the core of the reader or at least thru my point of view

Higher hydration, swollen cups, falls from the tree of life, it’s so corrupt
King Arthur quested for the holy grail without consideration that it was a coconut

Kinda threw me for a loop

I’d bet the historians never saw it coming, not even Canaanite interns
Everything you fail at in life is preparing you for the afterlife’s midterm
Combatants write under bedazzling phantom light, it’s Sabbath night at Ben-Hur’s
The message has been heard, when Petra pamphlets merged
& dead semantic slurs became decrepit, then resurrected, caressing Atlantis herds

WOW... This was just butter crisp honestly... Straight intelligence on the wording that made it highly descriptive and yet rhythmic with nice strides fam... Liked the internals but your content was just straight based man.... Props

Outlandish words from inside the chambers of Ishtar, where King Seti played
We’re all created to lend songs to virgin ears - to domesticate your mental state
Religion’s placed under Gimli’s blade; the face of my kin spawns into a gritty gray
Alert the gypsy race. They’re trying to turn the nation of Islam into a city state
It’s Megiddo Day, as Christians gauge their clips, grenades, and Christmas trays
Egyptian systems aren’t simple, with so many symbols eclipsed in gypsum jade
Soul collectors depicted trading rosary beads for first-born Jewish infant’s braids
No door to the desert, no food for miles, how does the spigot taste?

i just can't stop grinning honestly at the wit and then you incorporating the metaphorical grit on it with descriptive approaches and trims towards other events or characters merged into one hieroglyph of insightful and relic words. The gypsum blade was a fucking dope flip and scheme... Was bonkers vulg.

How do the rich and famous hog all the regal relics and call them upheavals?
Divine objects don’t belong in museums - they belong to the people
Considering “divine” means “of ancient significance” in times of the saga
My twelve tribes are fuel efficient, carpooling in Osiris’ Mazda
Please approach the endless coast with caution - there lies a silent armada
It's been over a fortnight in Malagra. Or midnight for marauders -
Hamonaptra’s hardly been mopped right, seems like a tourism issue
I’ve seen it… the spear of destiny is lodged inside the corpse of a Hindu
Court dismissals, library of Alexan-sangrea, catch us slinging the Buddha
Blowing rings from a hookah right outside the Kingdom of Judah
What if the pyramids were hiveminds used for linking stringent computers?
What do you honestly think you would do, huh?
Late fees for the book of revelations seem to be piling up, it’s tough business
I took a tugboat up the adjunct Isthmus with Thutmose’s young mistress
We passed by Moses on the Niles… what I loved most were the drugged kisses
It seems my cousins worked me, with more funds to aid this subtle journey
tried several interpretations of the Nubian language which I mumbled tersely
They all still translated to "Fuck you, Pay me, Infidel Scholar Who Wasn’t Worthy"


Honestly I can just quote the whole thing so I ain't gonna say too much any more but this whole verse was just dead from start to finish from the tip of your pen game SRS... The amount of internals and flips with the metaphorical surges was just sporadic and eclipsed different facets of critique and made this fucking work and blend like genuine silk man.

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