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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I read your piece with that black/white pic accompaniment with the spanish or whatever. It was good. But compared to your first few verses/open mics/s&f's, it's like a different person. Zero accusation of biting here, I'm just wondering if you had a particular style of writing (which you did) that then changed to become more feed friendly. I often recall your reaction to your roasting. Seemed almost open to criticism, saw the general tenor of the board, and reacted to it. You're a smart dude but you seem like a conformist.
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well, the black/white pic was for a poetry playoffs, which I treat completely separate from topicals.. except I like to rhyme more, now
in general. i think ive been refining my style... like this is from a verse from probably October
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Time flies, tied up in pride. Dragging by. Pillfull of anti-depressants, shout in St. Doubt's Basilica, pounce--
Tagged out at half-time. It's willful, huh? "Milk it, cuz. We'll build it up, more asinine,"
If DJ Illwill don't get you pussy- a jog down first baselines- you're a goner, past your prime.
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I mean, no doubt ^^that^^ was my style, but it did waste a shit-ton of syllables and rhymed sporadically, OM readers generally "had no idea what the fuck I was talking about". so i tried to cut down/ clarify which definitely cut 95% of the bulk out of my verses.. and was certainly inspired by some writers (like you were by say, Black), but I still develop my stuff the same way
and back when i joined i was trying to be as funny as i could, and tried to appeal to the general sense of humor here, like i do with any group of friends... maybe all that comes across as "changing to fit in"
but i dont post anything I wouldn't consider authentic, and i def don't think you can point to my writing and say "Oh this is ___'s style" or "Split took this from ___"
and i definitely don't give a fuck if I'm feed-friendly lol.