Yo, honestly thought this was a dope ass idea. Maybe a little old in concept, but I havnt seen this done in a while so for the moment its fresh
You both meshed really well here. Endsane brought the dope flow and vivid ideas of cyber sex into the opening verse real nice, thought you could of used a few well placed commas to break flow up here and there but other than that the shit was ill from you.
Bodey, what can I say love, I've watched you progress very nicely in the last few months and even more so since we did bonnie n clyde. Your concepts and flow are getting way smoother and more crystalized. This was one of the better reads I've seen of yours and you really came off as someone who's been polished for a long time even though your omnly just now finding yourself. Very dope. Good to see you being active and collabing as heavy as you have been
Both of y'all keep active and stay writing. Thanks for the read, dope drop
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