Netcees - View Single Post

PancakeBrah · 07-12-2013, 04:12 PM

Reads like some Brooklyn novelist trying too hard to be true to life. Could use more multis and better structure

07-12-2013, 04:12 PM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Reads like some Brooklyn novelist trying too hard to be true to life. Could use more multis and better structure