07-12-2013, 06:46 AM
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#7
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Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments
- 50 Wins
Champed
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- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
Rep Power: 24894581
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Gazette
We all know this faggit aint a true gangsta
Hands'll* pull out the Magnum - after he stole it from Zoolander
cool wordplay but no sting
He no-showed against Hush, think I can pinpoint the dysfunction
Saw his opponents name at the top - thought it was an instruction
Alright concept, alright instruction, but not much sting
What you layin stanzas for? Your rappings poor
At the very least Hands needs some polish, n I don't mean a manicure
Pretty played even with out facing someone with the name hands
After this one, we could even go further rounds
You won't see Hand bag me 'less he's throwing his purse around
this was the best name flip you had so far, but by this point im tired of them
I'm erasin' this turd, he's too disgraceful for words
So when we see Hands on the deck, there aint no sailors at work
urgh same as above
* hands'll / hansel
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don't explain your first line it was obvious - You had way too many nameflips, the first half of them were weak or misses, and the last half of them were pretty damn good but over done by that point...If you had restructured this and gone in a bit harder with the sting on the earlier concepts this would of been a solid drop - but you have potential it wasn't a bad read
Quote:
Originally Posted by Slowhands
Dear Milky,
we could say you're ok at text, but lets just be fuckin for real
me writing for gazette, is the closest he'll ever get to a publishin deal
not much sting but ok opener
i might rusty as hell, but you're just straight up horrible Gaz
only connection your punches have to me
... is both being forced in this match
nah brother not working
we know you're a fag, nerds the type to sit at the front of the classroom
so if this seems like a Lecture
... it's cause you lost to a ^shitty verse in that match too
didn't rhyme which is really pretty basic but whatever, this is an alright personal but wording isn't great and therefore effected the smooth execution
you're trash dude, but going green in text might not be a career for you
cause when we think of gazettes <- it consists of 90% of recycled material
so so not bad
you're not fear-able, even your roast pic proves this vigin isn't hitted on
so putting g on the spot, will be the closest this pussies ever been to oneLol your best line I think - was def lol worthy
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Result
@Gazette - You had well too many nameflips but the ones that worked were pretty good. So I am quoting you on 'Hands on the deck' and 'Throwing his purse' - heed my advice though and don't over do it, your best ones were at the end and by that point they were tiring...
@Slowhands - You had some straight up misses, 2 that did hit were not very hard hitting an I wouldn't quote them but you had LOTB for me with the closer. You were let down with poor execution mostly effected by wording IMO
Its a tight match up 2 strong quotes vs LOTB
Going to have to give the VOTE to GAZETTE with the LOTB to Slowhands
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Quote:
Originally Posted by El Muffin
Jay Welsh took your lunch money
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jabari Black
Flow....that punch was disgusting. Mvgt Flow
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