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Old 07-12-2013, 05:48 AM   #13
Gazette
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Meth aka Liquid

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.

what? no, this wasnt clear at all

after this L? this over-rated faggot mod-slave will be hating himself,
rofl @ the way bags handled liquid.. you'd think it was canadian milk.

decent punch. rhyming was horrible

grab my glock &... jk. but still i'll hope that ur dead,
u'll dia-sick faggot.. trust me, after this ur name will never be spoken again.

no

shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.

Liked this, best line so far, no complaints

reign down on this faggot until my men are ready to storm,
cuz ull see methyl prove to be a fake, yet he takes plenty of forms.

setup line was stupid filler, (the expression is 'rain down' by the way) - punch had potential but the delivery was shit. at least u had a 4-syll multie in this but thats the best thing about it


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Meth aka Liquid

Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy

decent, pretty funny

Why are you always on my dick, are you planning to meet?
Since I'm super soap I hope I start rubbing off on u, because god damnit u stink

eh, random n kinda childish

I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture

yep, works for me.

Ask about me around the net, Meth's a go getter my friend
The only Story around the net about you is that you're not even better than him

meh, didn't hit

I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the movies

This was good, probably your best bar


v/ meth for better execution
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