'Whatsapp'
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traffic accident
Lecture you had some legit attempts but your execution was poor, its that or your struggling with your own concepts, there was one or two where the initial idea is good but the way you spun it was weak. And that opener just came across as a catty observation lol.
Karma - urgh... Poor spelling, really in your face statement type lines, you give the impression your a wanna be G... didn't really like anything you had and then was subtly surprised near the end with the legit attempts and that whatsapp was not that poor for a new face..
Vote lecture - for better attempts
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