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Old 07-11-2013, 04:28 AM   #11
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and been met with disease. temperature freeze. textural dreams
intellectual retard writing text you believe
i've seen past lives reincarnate as a penciled reprieve
and futures cut short because they're measured in ki's
lost love and sacrificed a treasure for greed
to spend a single night inside of heaven's physique
followers are swallowers, its better to lead
everybody off that cliff into a sedative sea
the seconds that we spend behind electrical screens
are better spent dead until you're ready to breathe

fuck off. this was too dope. nobody else conveys human psychology as deftly or as effortlessly into real talk. your descriptions within lines like "backspace acrobatic" are just so vivid and well-conceived. I really enjoyed this, will be reading it many times over again.
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