catch a teeth ache when it's a bitten of me
not sure if you meant tooth ache, but teeth ache adds some personality to the written.
and I fell for the trap lol
cause I understand teeths not the proper plural of tooth.
but I did catch this
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But it's a part of my job to you the boarder to draw in your thoughts and view the story. I'm constantly gone, I do exploring to get lost in the sound of new recordings.
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should read:
But it's part of my job to use the boarder to draw in your thoughts and view the story. I'm constantly gone, I do expoloring to get lost in sound of new recordings.
Dropping the 'a', fixing the 'you' typo to use, comma after gone and dropping 'the' in "in the sound".
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Very dope drop...flow was hot and hit.
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What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.
Last edited by Coup; 07-11-2013 at 02:36 AM.
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