[dead man]

I am toting, spitting hot, spitting dope I mean

i see what you did there..

this was pretty interesting coming from you in that i have never really read you flex-rhyming, all the verses i have read from you have been more directional

I aint gotta be the best, I am actually the worst perfectly

ha

The lies we tell ourselves are truly our most dangerous weapons

Show me what a man does when he is all alone, and I will show u what his hobby is

u have not started to live until u face death

its as if you are wrapping rhyme around nuggets of insight you were intent on telling us anyway. i feel like you are trying to shake us awake. knowing you're not responsible if we keep sleeping anyway.

i like a lot of what you have to say man. it seems as though you're coming from an honest place, and are not intending on being preachy or trying to indoctrinate anybody. just throw a few rhymes up that actually are saying something.

as a literary hip-hop work i was not a fan of it's execution. there was no rhythm to this that i was catching on to. but as a piece of writing, it was something worth reading if only because you have many of the thought provoking statements mentioned above.

i hope you continue to drop OM's brother..




thanks