07-10-2013, 10:11 AM
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#11
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Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments
- 50 Wins
Champed
- BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
Rep Power: 24894581
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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine
lil welcoming key. however this goes, hang around, league and tourney stuff's always a lot faster w/ votes.
I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
K
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in Spanish
lol
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
Ok wordplay, sting was lacking
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world
bit mean...
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You came laxed.... I already read ahead... you got this
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Originally Posted by Animosi T
Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine
I see where you were going, waaaaay to much filler, the sting wasn't great, define your concept, for example sex life and time and the age of wine, then set up/punchline which you could of done with half the words here... does this make sense??? hit me up on pm if it doesn't an ill explain better, im trying to do some quick voting
4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer
weak
You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.
weak
My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)
weak
Last bar, Anderson Silva got knocked out by a guy named Chris Wiedman. Silva was dancing around.
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Vote Sharp
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Originally Posted by El Muffin
Jay Welsh took your lunch money
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jabari Black
Flow....that punch was disgusting. Mvgt Flow
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