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Originally Posted by voidformula
Favorite part was;
take these rhymes as they meant to be, fine intricate keys..
divine as da vinci unleashed, derived from the sickest of inks
Thought that was pretty smooth.
It got a bit hard to flow around 2/3rds of the way through but picked back up in the end. I think it was mainly the engines line that threw me off. I'm sure if I re-read it a few times I could understand your scheme a bit better for that part, I'm just basing off first read-through.
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word, you may have lost the flow, cuz thats the end of the "addicted to illiterate" line, and it almost makes you wanna read it fast up to that point, then it slows you down then speeds you back up again wit the "tyson" line..lol thanks for checking me out tho fam