[dead man]

when i first opened the thread i was slightly disappointed in the length but only cause this was nicely done and it would have been dope to try to extend the verse even longer

pretty much felt like a rhyme mechanic exercise. sword sharpening etc.. ive never seen you join up into any sort of league for writing competitively, only drop these lil poisonous darts in om sections but i enjoy all of them. while you suggest i write more upbeat and positive verses, i challenge you to write something darker and more thematic..

for the record, i think you came out with guns blazing to introduce this one and it began to sort of lull towards the end. right around the smile is so blingy..

thanks