[Geno]

Good piece.
Very descriptive first segment of what the idea of pictures really capture and your comprehension of what they are is. Thought your style was pretty fluent with rhymes and the patterns were well scripted in the first half.

The second half seemed like you were just tired of writing but knew you weren't finished and didn't wanna quit til it was done. Its good to see you have a determination in you, I just wish you would have took your time a little more with the second half. Flow seemed choppy and content started to stagger off imo. Good to see you posting for us to enjoy though. Keep dropping/stay active man. 1