[Geno]

Feels like you have a lot more to offer. Seeing as how you said this was a quick piece.. that's what I took it for. Had some dope storytelling behind it.. found it talking about a character who seemed to be built up a little in the beginning and then started to break down what the build up was caused by. I tthink if you take your time and find your flow/scheme a little better, that you would be more happy with the outcome. But you already knew that I think. Good to see a new face, stay active and keep posting. Peep other peoples posts and respond when you have time.. this will also help you grow and you'll find that more people will feed you if your doing the same.

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