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Old 07-08-2013, 12:38 AM   #17
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all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick
Not feeling.
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
Good nameplay personal.
you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those
Solid wordplay personal, could be flipped better.
dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'
Good nameplay.
ur league run's pathetic. sayin ur dope is just a charade
u cant stay a float... ure more like a fat tuba player fallin behind the parade
Old wordplay, flip is alright.
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era
Good crew nameplay closer.

vs

al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
Old cliche play, decent current event flip.
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
Good nameplay.
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
Good.
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
Good nameplay, wording could of been better.
aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda
I used a similar line in Fall Brawl, flip is ok. Multies are off and don't like the wording.
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height
Good nameplay closer.


Eh, close battle. Could go either way. Liked about 3 lines from each. Both had an old concept as well as some wording issues. I'll go with AK for having one more concept I really liked, but just not hitting the wording out of the park. I will say this, though... Sharp really surprised me here and was much better than I remembered him. He's definitely one of the best on the site at this point and am sure he'll start champing a bunch of shit real soon. Props to both.

/v allen knight
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