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StarFaggot · 07-07-2013, 10:54 PM

Minus pairs - which leaves us as single delegates
We can all thrive but feeding lies leaves u desperate.
Like taro myths, my palm will give you death as a settlement,
the future That i bring and hold- i keep completely separate.
^ This was cool.

A bit hard to follow and decipher whether you were saying some deep clever ish or if it was just elementary. Good job though.

and if you cherish your freedom, kids study your rights,
cuz when the day arrives you'll all have to get up & fight.
see, we're the calmest at night but it's not cuz we're sleeping
we're just channeling thoughts past our process of thinking,
^ Dope and true.

Good lines from Just C and nice personal touch.

Good collab. Could've been more unison but I don't really dabble in written works like this so I cant really speak on it with credentials.

07-07-2013, 10:54 PM	#20
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Minus pairs - which leaves us as single delegates We can all thrive but feeding lies leaves u desperate. Like taro myths, my palm will give you death as a settlement, the future That i bring and hold- i keep completely separate. ^ This was cool. A bit hard to follow and decipher whether you were saying some deep clever ish or if it was just elementary. Good job though. and if you cherish your freedom, kids study your rights, cuz when the day arrives you'll all have to get up & fight. see, we're the calmest at night but it's not cuz we're sleeping we're just channeling thoughts past our process of thinking, ^ Dope and true. Good lines from Just C and nice personal touch. Good collab. Could've been more unison but I don't really dabble in written works like this so I cant really speak on it with credentials. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]