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Old 01-20-2013, 07:47 PM   #6
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Funny. After a few lines I was like yo.. this has to be harmon lol

Piece was ill, the raw content you deliver is always intense and the ability you have to make every thought become vivdly detailed is amazing. Definitely seemed to have a few misses rhythmically here and there.. but I think your pieces are more about pronunciation then completely matching syllables to perfection. Also, this piece as is similar to most of your works shows a strength on deciding when too many words is too many words. Often I find in your works that a word most people would use to complete a similar thought had been left out. I think this is a technique used to gain a flow flow. Its really a sick art to be able to do this and not have the verse seem like its all hacked up. You do it well. Good to see you btw ;-)
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