The title kinda put me off a bit, I was thinkin' this was gonna be some 'look how many bitches I can get' crap. But it wasn't. I enjoyed the read and I know the feelin' man and it is crazy painful so kudos for lettin' that shit out in such an honest way.
Loved the symbolism and wordplay.
Particularly this section and these punches:
Once you have a love lost two hearts can never manage
I ate the shit you fed me and still I remain famished
We made the same mistakes but you took it a step further
When I heard you fucked another man my mind became murdered
And yet still I sustained my purpose while you remained nervous
When your feelings resurfaced it was such a disdain disservice
From death's door the earth spins its axis and still you pretend
Now the earth revolves around you? Bitch, it'll never end
Still this stench lingers, a musky vapor of cum and hatred
How you took this brittle heart, tore it apart and raped it
Something that remains sacred is just nothing to you
How could we birth a baby boy that means NOTHING TO YOU?
awesome spin on the general moaning complaints of a woman in the same position. Absolutely true and worded brilliantly.
Keep droppin'.
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