shocked at just writes verses development...i anint' hating on any cat, but this piece stirred me up. The gay agenda is in full swing, ack...we are truly living in the last days ladies and gentlemen...again no hate and may dude rest in peace.
storyteller what did you mean by this line ?:
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Living legend where bibles recite for pensions,
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storyteller you did a good job of providing some monologue to get this piece going, set up just writes section pretty good...liked the hook too.
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Scoundrel of death, I await for my binge of acceptance,
Wrap time with a vengeance and spear god for some leverage.
A shadow that's headless no one shakes me to be separate,
So I lay uncontested no strings to model- I'm helpless.
That's the feeling I'm left with cause judgement is played,
We have the right to bare arms but with the same sex it's reckless.
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solid prose.
I see also the hypocritical state of the nations and how they blindly follow arbitrary ideals to establish laws ...most of the time it's in their favor and it's BS. All substantial matters indeed, but who is behind all this ? I think storyteller said it best in the hook
good read...had to go through it a few times because the message was very subtle.