Atom-
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bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.
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an abstract punch and it works on a literary level, not sure how it makes sense to the senses tho...lol creative tho.
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he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.
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lol'd nice concept
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god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.
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Okay tho...good concept,
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just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.
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hmmm
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guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.
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nice enough
Gazette
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You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)
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hmmm I see what you did
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Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
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this works name play etc..
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Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
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funny...something off tho but it works
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No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try
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best lines good stuff
v/ Gazette
just a bit cleaner and edged it in execution....
g'luck
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