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Old 07-06-2013, 06:43 PM   #4
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This was amazing. Brutal, honest, and I can relate to it.

Great metaphors, great wordplay and vocab but the thing that stood out for me was the realism of it. It seemed like you almost didn't try to be technical or to twist your sentences in any way. it just flowed nice. Great man keep droppin'.
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