Pride - ur stuff read real clean n flowed nice.. But a lot of ur punches came off kinda statementish or simple.. Try to up ur wit man... But line wise I got u with bitch set ups and I'll give u Utmost in a sentence cu it was funny. Ur closer almost hit with a lol factor, but closer concept is played to me. And the uti line woulda been more effective if executed w better wording, rather than coming across like a statement.
Utmost - similar problems with ur wording to me, almost feels to verbose at times imo.. But line wise I got sitting pretty n scat.. With near hits on plank (I liked the concept extention, but it was worded poorly), nik-A retro and pricey hoes, but some problem w wording. Ur closer was actually worded well but played, and I wasn't feeling x press or dual shock at all.
Utmost had the better concepts as well as execution. So..
V/utmost
Last edited by Rawn M.D.; 07-06-2013 at 05:12 AM.
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