Untold - I got u with so shady... Wood panel had potential but didn't really hit to well, opener wasn't bad but not great, same with closer but it was a little weaker bc of wording.. And the same thing w alternate prolly would need better of u stressed the age more.
Fgr - I have u with foretold, macho man was decent as well
So was ass on the line, but could a been worded more effectively however those played concepts really hurt u.. I mean u didn't even flip them in a new/original way..
I got untold with better wording as well as more consistent fresher concepts
v/untold
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