[Split]

Was an average student, just one in ninety nine of a hundred kids
- I liked the delivery on this line a lot

Overall the metaphors were pretty thick but fit the writing really well.

Didnt focus too hard on the technical aspects and came across as very honest and to the point.

It did get kinda stale and restricted towards the end, perhaps too much allusion and not enough direct description made it feel kinda aloof

Wil be looking out for more pieces