thought objective gave more depth and story direction, going from a clear start to a clear end. Schemes hit and flowed better than his opponent. Innovator was more direct, easier to follow, ended abruptly with a plot change not fully explained and did not transition well......same concepts.
v/objective overall a more engaging take
good luck.
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Last edited by Coup; 07-05-2013 at 11:36 PM.
Reason: name flip
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