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Old 07-05-2013, 10:25 PM   #9
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all this fags posts suckkkk. one glance i nearly get sick
if im sayin Allen's Elite... its cuz hes unwanted as that Undead prick
cool, connection isn't that hard hitting though.
dude barely beat chyeahh in a cyph. thats like pitiful's definition
we all know Al Po' at text... considering that dude's his main competition
it's cool but your connections are always too simple/easy to see.
you insulting the site was sad. mighta thought you was sonnin' hoes
but its generous sayin that Diss functions... cuz each line was one a' those
not bad, feelin it.
dude cant handle chicks. do girls wanna date him? never
Al Green w/ relationships... and ironically never hears 'lets stay together'
it's nice but not hard hitting.
ur league run's pathetic. sayin ur dope is just a charade
u cant stay a float... ure more like a fat tuba player fallin behind the parade
okay.
n ya crews a buncha fags. act hard, but theres no terror
shit, a group as gay as the BGs aint been seen since the disco era
nah. ur only miss tho imo.

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al's rippin' up ur girls pussy, feelin' her from thighs to breast
& fuckin till im so deep in the hole it resembles Chris Tuckers debt wit the IRS
nice.
no1 wants to be like u faggot, fashion sense is trash u coward
last person that dressed sharp, was his boyfriend after he fucked'em in the ass for hours
ROFL.
ur broke as fuck neva have stacks to touch, faggot i'll rec ya bad
last time u had 2 large in ur palms...u were jerking off acouple of dudes for extra cash
cool.
u neva get girls to put out, the creepy type got'em hating men
cuz any bitch sharp nails, is scratchin'em wit those tryna stop him from raping them
wording isn't prime here, but the concept is certainly nice.
aimin' the double barrel at ur temple, poppin at limbs to murk ya
till the point ur brains are split eight ways & he writes a OM on his twins murda
meh
the shit u say on heres a mockery, ur tails are the fuckin wack type
only time i wanna see nine stories, is watching u fall head first from that height
too easy, not bad i guess.

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good battle, let me say i enjoyed reading both verses. for me, allen had better concepts, & for me, executed them better aswell. sharps verse wasn't bad by any means but his connections are always just a lil too obvious for me. overall allens bars had more of that "ahhh" factor for me & i have him edging this one. good verse tho boys

v/ allen
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