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Passive aggression which seems to only pass the aggressor,
Taking action is questioned when clawing to the top is measured.
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Dope^
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Kept his chin tucked in the gallows of a discreet betrayal pattern.
Rode along with the masses and circled the globe like Saturn,
But just like the planet he stays at a distance from -warmth in the shadows.
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good imagery, brilliant texture created...lot's of this in here. That's you doing you.
you were talking about a lot in this written and I have no idea what to anchor it to...whatever you are about to say to me in your next post as to what this was about
: it should have been woven and established in this text. This was a middle of something I feel you left out, like a time, place, reason or a concept that was clear. This whole piece just felt incomplete and confused.
I guess this sums it up, but rather cheaply cos the main body was a bit all over the place:
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Frank lived for the fame but never for the attention he asked,
So his life was crystal clear till someone took a swing and shattered that glass.
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decent flow...this was not so hot for example:
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He said it'd be hard to swallow but his life was already a mess.
No one cared to see that note so how's one to confess,
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no hate, just honest thoughts. I know what you can bring to the table, so no worries man, I seen some of your work, and it's dope. This OM has high standards (prolly why I hardly posts lol jking)