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Old 01-30-2013, 03:12 PM   #11
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Fuck this nigga.. I got 2 cannons that'll blast thru ya frame
Or my goons'll show Engages to the chest til his heart can't do THAT w/ his brain
GOW gave me a bye here.. ain't a threat & ya can't hurt me
You're fuckin trash, so I'm jus rubbin Purell's in w/out even gettin my hands dirty
So fuck the gun bars, cuz I gotta steak knife that WILL rip ya
Send 'em to Heaven.. on your way to see Mama & it ain't date night w/ ill nik-A

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Net thug’ll spit some tired gun shit knowin’ it’s not the truth, frontin’ like u have a glock to shoot
He was picked on being so odd in school, tryna get the angle on me? Too dumb to factor hypotenuse
Homo has the taste to savor dudes’ cocks. Like General Sherman I’m igniting flames thru ur block
Ya time’s up, I’ll cut you open, leave ur heart on display, so that’s what I call a Neighborhood watch

well, neigh didn't spend too much time on his verse and went w/ the more obvious concepts, but since no one else has battled energy before, nothing came across as played to me and therefore all the simple bars hit. plus his wording was good as always. pure's i didn't like as much. i can appreciate it for what it is, but imo, wording should be conciser than that. well, energy still had some bars, but stuff like the hiv thing w/ the bolding is a no-no. i think if energy can convert his lines to shortbar he'll be good, because he has some ideas. here i have neigh w/ the better wording and better concepts too. that hiv thing really hurt u. if u have to bold things in a line to make the concept make sense, then it's too far-fetched. no hate, just tryna help u see what's the accepted standard here.
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