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Old 07-04-2013, 05:38 PM   #1
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both of you shut up


Your not a real emcee, ur the attention whore type
rhyme a few words to get noticed..
but your names the closest A will ever come To a Mic
really dated kind of nameflip
You wanna act out despite, ur a lame without flare
we all know when you break down an Atom.. E=MC2
less old but still old. coolish tho
Get it a MC whos Square, fuck it,
I didn't even write this shit..
You got 3 wins? then its time for me to right this ship
this was so unneeded. you can take time to write shit but this is like something you'd say while freestyling in person
Cause thinkin its smooth sailin & the W's where u might go
when this bitches flow wouldn't even count as menstrual cycle
corny idea, rhyme is off, and you addressed him in the second person and third in the same phrase. sloppy mistakes
I haven't done text in years n thats what makes this sick
I seen shit that'll make your shit look like shit, back in 2006
okay idea but delievered as a satement
To find the conclusion to this battle after this faggot chokes
all u have to do is put L before A ND watch me SLIDE the votes
again, not a live battle. pretty corny idea
w/e.



my shit comes correct while you're known to flop more,
w/ your wackness you need to come clean, PLUS this'll be a wash, board.
who were you addressing with this? you were addressing your opponent directly in the setup, then addressed 'board' in the punch. i took it to be the board, but if you're calling him board or saying you'll be board its unclear. also meh idea
keep bitching & moping.. i'll start ripping you open,
this will be the funniest upset like conflicting emotions!
kind of a flex line. okay idea but deliver was lame
ur verse isn't fire u retard, i guess i'll lend u a torch,
part of a driveby?! this faggot might pull up n shoot, either way it'll end up in court.
not too well done
i'll read ur verse, NO FUCKING QUOTES. i'm sick of it.
ur wack shit needs a character limit, we should have battled on twitter bitch.
closest thing to a punch so far but it was mad statementish
you need to take time w/ ur bars, it's ok find ur purpose boss,
so i told him to reach deep down & he started trying to jerk me off.
again, watch who you're addressing. 'you' in the setup and 'he' in the punch. this didnt really work
u fell off, used to be average but now i know it's true you slipped,
kid wouldn't light me up w/ the Tech, NO. it'd be more like strobes&music bitch.
same issue with who youre addressing. Tech, no is an alright idea but the way it was done took a lot away from it


mc2 was corny but the best attempt of the battle. atom couldve had it easily but his concepts were mad rushed and didnt really hit

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