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Old 07-03-2013, 08:05 PM   #11
Vulgar
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Buddha - I thought this was alright, tbh. No real standouts, just a well rounded verse. Would've liked to see more creative concepts thrown around or maybe wordplay.

Genocide - Whole verse was a quotable. Pleasing visuals, accurate rhyme schemes and you formed it all with patience.

The servants of war ain't surrendering shit, we're better equipped
To rip your eyes out, and restore your contacts like a memory chip
I'm on a ketameanz binge, seringe, with methanphetamine hits
A trip, that changes my perception of the world into a seventies twist
^Niceness.

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