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Old 07-03-2013, 04:00 PM   #9
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i honestly think, if writing is a reflection of its author, that you are borderline insane. i mean this was crazy, for what it was. and then objectively quite mad, too. your lexical base is respectably vast, and arguably overdone in execution... but that's entirely you, and your style. verbosity is/can be a double -edged sword, in my humble opinion, but it embodies the structural, inexorable resilience you pen with... it allows creation of these obscure threads of polysyllabic congruence, while the core of your writing is an unassailable non-sense so confident in its poise, it begins to convince you it's intelligible. it's equal parts mesmerizing and repulsive. do you take (many) drugs? i believe i caught the gist of this piece, it comes in peace, tongue-in-cheek, on the rotating kebab skewer sitting a perfect equidistance between Angels and Demons, on the spectrum of causation. or something. shout outs to butter pecan Rican, ofc.

in summation: i liked it, you off-key banana bastard.

MACCABEES

hit me back, i've only got one thread up.

pz.

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