you have really good presence on the mic. great emotion, voice is coming through great, got that cockiness to you. it comes off like you been doing this for a long time, sounds like a real rapper not just some dude off a site haha. props. im no producer so have no comment on that side of things so just the actual spitting. only thing i could really criticize is maybe try to cram less words in your bars cause a few times u had to really spit ur verse really fast which takes away from articulating and pronouncing a bit. u pulled off the fast shit pretty well tho man. again props overall. you def know what ur doing as far as audio shit goes. i'de say ur probly alot better than most the dudes on here (including myself) or they would be posting more audios. just doesn't come off real amateurish if you know what i mean, like i said, sounds like u been doing this a while
yes use soundcloud
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