this was pretty dope, had some nice concepts and for me, when I read it out loud it flowed off pretty smooth. the structure kinda threw me off as you were putting the whole pars in one line with the ... break but I think that just reflects personal style. anyways man, yea i liked this. keep writing, thanks for feeding that collab too. as far as my verse, I don't think I have battled before lol. maybe i should try. peace
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