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This was plain abstract writing which I can honestly appreciate and come to enjoy honestly cause it puts a stamp on flexibility. The verse was nice as a whole but when broken into sectors or stanzas you find the little grammar issues or fragmented ideas but its the sense of this as a whole come to together doesn't make it seem too far fetched ya know its nice though good writing man no negatives cause your write for you and it seems pretty stupid to judge since we're all in the same boat as non established writers